"We got used to standing in line from seven o'clock in the morning, to twelve noon, and again at seven o'clock in the evening. We stood in a line queue with a plate in our hand, into which they ladled a little warmed-up water with a salty or a coffe flavor. Or else thy gave us a few potatoes. We got used to sleeping without a bed, to saluting every uniform, not to walk on sidewalks and then again to walk on the sidewalks. We got used to undeserved slaps, blows, and executions. We got accustomed to seeing people die in their own excrement, to seeing piled-up coffins full of corpse, to seeing the sick amid dirt and filth and to seeing helpless doctors. We got accustomed to it that from time to time, one thousand unhappy souls would come here and that, from time to time, another thousands unhappy souls would go away..."I've commented on jacks, Antwon's, Alexis, Eduardo, Erik
Greetings Benny! Now I am confused when you were describing your butterfly. You talked about colors that weren't present on your butterfly or at least weren't visible on the photo. Also, you don't pull much evidence from your poem, which is needed to support the things you say. Also being one who has your poem, I can appreciate the illustration on the butterfly. Just know Benny that you can do way more, as the sky is the limit to your abilities. I hope, you will do as good as you plan.
ReplyDeleteThis butterfly looks good and shows many things that was shown on the poem. I can see the people in the line. Another one I can see the people that are in the line., and the dead people. One problem with the butterfly is that it lacks color, it needed at least one more color to make it colorful, even though you talked about the colors in your butterfly.
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